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timberlord
timberlordLv143yrtimberlord

It was quite the interesting read, even if it was flawed, until it hit a certain chapter and it turned ****. I have no doubt the author is not going to change anything, and I respect him for his dedication in writing, but honestly this novel is not for me. It turned into a real mess with no direction, no synergy real quick. You have no idea what the f is going on at that point, and our MC's family situation turns real f ed up quick. The author's sense of writing takes a nosedive, or maybe it was like that in the first place, and the novel just turns into a hentai/**** plot lmao. Suddenly his power isnt the card power, its just some incubus esque women fucking power that attracts 6 or 7 females for him in a week lul. And his mother is a huge super duper mega hoe* btw, and she aint afraid to flaunt it like a badge of honor it seems. Anyway, until that chapter it was actually going alright, but my brain cannot read past that atrocity. One final thing, his future daughters who inherit his bloodline are also gonna be mega whores too, with potentially the number of males in the whole universe as their body count

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Shadewind
ShadewindLv6Shadewind

Seriously dude ...... Doea author have a serious level of slut fetishe ......?

Virtuous_Vanity
Virtuous_VanityLv5Virtuous_Vanity

What do you mean by his mom being a THOT? Could you explain? I really want to know this before I read the chapters.

Supreme_Devil
Supreme_DevilLv4Supreme_Devil

Don't read please don't, it will mind-fck you.

Virtuous_Vanity:What do you mean by his mom being a THOT? Could you explain? I really want to know this before I read the chapters.
Shadewind
ShadewindLv6Shadewind

It means his mom is like a genuine succubus who sleeps with any man she can find even if the man is extremely disgusting or her enemy she will enjoy having sex with that person . Also his daughter will also be slut as they will also go after any man she can find even the said person is disgusting ( Imagine a person covered in đŸ’©) just like his mother . So i advice you to not read it . As i myself haven't read it after I read the about his mother situation ( P.S I only read it confirm why everyone give it such a low review and I agree with everyone)

Virtuous_Vanity:What do you mean by his mom being a THOT? Could you explain? I really want to know this before I read the chapters.
Doge_Blade
Doge_BladeLv13Doge_Blade

How did it turn into a hentai plot and **** exactly? Fucking dumbass atleast know what your talking about before commenting on this

Culture_Lover
Culture_LoverLv12Culture_Lover

Su madre es una puta en celo xd

Virtuous_Vanity:What do you mean by his mom being a THOT? Could you explain? I really want to know this before I read the chapters.