Review Detail of SnowRider in Reborn in Narutoverse with a Unique System

Item: Reborn in Narutoverse with a Unique System
Rating: 2.2

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SnowRiderLv43yrSnowRider

It's a shame, good ideas but no character dev, no interactions between characters... Not a story really just a string of events being described and new powers added...

Reborn in Narutoverse with a Unique System

Mythical_Soul

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Mythical_SoulAuthorMythical_Soul

Character development isn't an ez thing especially for new writers for me but I am still tryin to do it.

3yr