If you do like Pokemon, you really will need to check this novel out. It's really well written, and the author has lots of knowledge about Pokemons. The world background is fascinating and the character development is well done, and it's easy to read and picture, so there aren't any complaints on that field. So if you like really well-written novel or are Pokemon fan even better if you are both of them, check this novel out as the author really has put a time to write this one and develop the characters and world background.

Pokemoooooooooon story, I love pokemons, and I really loved reading here about them. I loved Athena as well, lol. Your english writing is very good mate, you always succeed in capturing my attention and make me read without feeling the time passing. Stability of update is great, I hope you keep that high high rate, lol. continue the hard work author, you are doing great job here. RS

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Read till chapter 117 First 20 chapters are incredibly boring (but I guess necessary to build the background story of MC). My first novel/fanfic where MC is a girl. Kudos to that author. The novel does show bad effects of having to suffer constant bullying throughout your childhood, which pretty much messes up MC's personality. A good story if u like to read this. Rate of update is very good (5* there). My main issue with this fanfic, is that the elite four and gym leaders are incredibly weak. Till chapter 117, only 2 trainers could be called strong, they are Lance and Red. The MC, who had no interest or talent in Pokémon battles for first 15 years in her life, and has pretty weak pokemons easily manages to beat Koga. She manages to beat 3 of the other elite fours without much issue. So that's a big disappointment for me. I wanna see strong trainers like elite 4 and gym leaders to actually be strong and not just a pushover. Anyways, it's a good read if u aren't overly obsessed with Pokémon battles and just wanna enjoy the story. Shows how evil organisations fool and operates very well.

Enjoy my fanfic! Note: Does not include gym badges, Pokemon League. Mc does not wish to become the very best like no one ever was...........

Well I'm not really a fan of fanatics but I like how you took your knowledge of Pokemon and made it into like an original series only cooler.I love your writing skill and how you descriptions skills the story line is very interesting and continue doing a great job keep doing you :)

Pokemon no way you can hate them. The pokemon was the best anime and the first anime I watched as a kid. This story is great and non cliché and don't start it " I wanna be the number one" I just read it up to ch 5 and will continue to read wish somebody told me about this before it will to tough to catch up. But still awesome fanfic. You have my seal of approval 😁.

First of of, this book is really cool! I think this is a must-read for pokemon fans. Personally what I love most about the book is Luna Evergreen's characteristics. The way the author portrays her is really realistic. She felt like an actual living person. So human. I don't often see this in light novels. There are other amazing things about this story as well. Great Work!

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