A funny story with an interesting premise! I like how the author develops the "System of Adding Points", he adds new functions as the story goes. Of course, sometimes the moment when these new functions appear, are a little convenient for the MC, but it is easy to ignore this. After all, at the end of the day this is just a story! About the MC, his personality and attitudes are convincing enough to remember attitudes that a real person would take if he were in his place. So... in general the story is very good, and has a very stable rate of development.
Eternal Era
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