Review Detail of RyZoonHD in God of Vampires
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So. Im sorry to give this book such a rating, but heres why: 1. It is very rushed and quick, the mc could destroy an entire world in a few hundred words. Something like that could deserve more detail and words, it could also make the book better. 2. because of my first point, the world and character development suffers a bit, you dont get to know the enemies so well, and the mc could use some more introduction at the beginning. 3. the chapters are to short. the chaoters are always about 600-700 words. its not that big of a problem, but a bit longer wouldnt damage the book. 4. The story. I cant tell you how much i like the idea and the base of the story, but because of the points i made and some smaller mistakes, it isnt used to its full potential. Now at the end i want to say, i havent read the book in its entiry and it may change in the chapters i have yet to read. i can also understand the „mistakes“, writing a book isnt that easy. Still, great work author!
God of Vampires
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I completely agree. It has soo much untapped potential. This book would flourish if more time was spent on the Character and world development. It’s ok to be op but even Saitama let’s his enemy’s run around and kills them allowing for they’re characters to be exposed to the reader/viewers showing all characters traits powers and so on. This also helps as gauge just how much stronger the mc is too everyone else making him soo much more revered in our minds 🤦🏾♂️I’m sad when a book’s potential is tarnished
INDOMITABLE:I completely agree. It has soo much untapped potential. This book would flourish if more time was spent on the Character and world development. It’s ok to be op but even Saitama let’s his enemy’s run around and kills them allowing for they’re characters to be exposed to the reader/viewers showing all characters traits powers and so on. This also helps as gauge just how much stronger the mc is too everyone else making him soo much more revered in our minds 🤦🏾♂️I’m sad when a book’s potential is tarnished