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Vynris_Foxtail
Vynris_FoxtailLv144yr
2020-08-27 02:50

Editing is needed...a least here and there... ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

BEING AN EMPEROR IN STAR WARS

outerself19
4.2
37 Chs

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Tonyorobsky
TonyorobskyLv13

I have a few problems with this fanfics, and their source is the wishes. He only needed 3 wishes. 4 if you add personalized race and appearance. The system, the world to be king of, the unlimited amount of ressources and blueprints. -Systems are usually used to help the protagonist grow in strenght and skills, or provide a special ability because of their lack of power. Here, the system is near useless. With the system he could have learned the force arts, and everything else like marksmanship, piloting, engineering. -With the ressources and blueprints he could have made his own clone army generator and starforge. -With the planet and its civilization, he could have conquered it, recruiting and training his 4 pretty servants along the way, and become king. His growth has taken 2-4 chapters. It doesn’t even feel like those 5000 years of training and learning were a big deal. Just a waste of time. Having so many things he can customize, being his own superpower different from Palpatine Empire and the republic/resistance, everything he gets is just a copy of what Palpatine would have. Waste of his knowledge in engineering. His own home world is barely described, nothing of his work as king (territory management). It would gave been so much better with at least 10-15 chapters to sum up his rise to power, improving his planet and building his military (like starting at 17yo, finishing at 20yo). Then move to the other planets.

4yr

holosagewolf32
holosagewolf32Lv15

author sama this is so far quite great. the grammar and spelling is on point the gender is not being mixed up like most novels. so i have high hopes. also will you bring in the kotor 2 ravager? and modify it so the damage is just appearance wise? since who wouldnt freak out with a ship that looks like its been through hell take almost no damage and opens fire on you?

4yr
AllenCross
AllenCrossLv1

What I didn't like: 1) Very MC, there is no sane achievement of power. 2) The world is faded, everything revolves around MC, four girls are so for the background (not disclosed), his kingdom likewise does not take part in his life, no events happen that it is that it is not. 3) The work is written as if torn, as if the author is jumping like a kangaroo from thought to thought. 4) The motivation of the hero is not clear, what he wants and what to achieve, what goals he pursues, just as the hero himself is not formed, we do not know anything about him in fact. 5) The battles of both the protagonist and space, ground-based are very unworked, do not keep you in tension and there is no desire to know how the confrontation will unfold. Nagging: 1) A very strong obsession with technology and clones of the forces of the republic, there is no creativity. 2) It is annoying every time when another clone is mentioned, you write in what phase it is dressed. 3) Where did Plokun go when, was going to find out from where there was a surge of strength... What I liked: 1) The choice of the universe for the work.

4yr
truck_sama
truck_samaLv2

Keep it up I love the book it’s amazing Please don’t drop the book is to great for that You should hook him up with padme that would be awesome and allow him to take a padawan during the clone wars

4yr
neobenmike
neobenmikeLv5

Writing quality is good, updates too average pacing story development is quite normal so many plot holes Edgy mc that makes the opposite sex blush for him a king that likes to bow to other monarchs an mc that shows bouts of immaturity for a thousands of year old force user

4yr
Anthony_Capielo
Anthony_CapieloLv3

,......, ................,...........................................................................................................................

4yr
ggg_0865
ggg_0865Lv4

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4yr
Terry_Hilfiger
Terry_HilfigerLv3

Hi! It's a very interesting idea. I give four scores, the reason is the low number of chapters. THANKS!THANKS!THANKS!THANKS!THANKS!THANKS!THANKS!THANKS!THANKS!

4yr
Hgoma
HgomaLv4

Seven stupid wishes "granted'₹" Phk , The guy have anxiety, was not stated why I put my hand in the tale of demon and gods have affinity to the world of A Returner magic should be special to the point like they have feelings or basically being able to get a good idea of what I want to do with the fact that I am giving you a hard time with you and your family and friends with you and your family to be in the tale of demon and gods.. I JUST KEPT PRESSING THE WORDS THAT CAME IN THE SUGGESTION BOX😂

3yr
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