Review Detail of LaDiDah in The Queer Emperor's Wife Is A Little Too Daring!

I likes how this novel stands out a bit on the formatting. Adding the quotes is a nice touch, and the emojis really add a great “teenager” vibe that fits both the main character and the setting. My feedback would be you have some great comedic relief included, so to make that more Impactful it might make your writing stronger to include some longer paragraph structures to spice up the reading flow.