The plot seems quite interesting so far, but I'm definitely biased as I'm a really big fan of emotional traumatic stories myself. The emoticons, or kaomojis as they seem to be called. Personally I'm not a fan, and I think they detract from the flow of the story. Still, I'm somewhat able to ignore them so it's not the worst. The grammar is somewhat solid, a few shortcomings but nothing that's too bad.
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