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Dan_RyderLv33yrDan_Ryder

Edit the syntax errors and break it down into multiple chapters for readability. A lot of places need spaces. It was interesting read though. Good work new author!

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thedragon_killer89

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thedragon_killer89Authorthedragon_killer89

Thank you. I just divided into 8 parts for easier readability.

3yr

Dan_RyderLv3Dan_Ryder

gj, don't forget your cross review on my novel

thedragon_killer89:Thank you. I just divided into 8 parts for easier readability.

3yr