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So, I just have to ask, when did we throw any pretense at using standard English grammar out the window? I can understand using a translation program to translate a work to a language other than the language it was written in, but in the process of publish inshing said work in English there are standards and conventions that should be maintained. Quotation Mark's for instance. A minor thing that on the whole gives a flow and cadence to and work of fiction, especially when used with additional exposition and emotive information. Paragraphs more than two sentences long would be another feature of common written English that the average fifth grader has been exposed to and should, usually, have a grasp of. The use of transitioan punctuation. An understanding of phononyms, and words that should the same but have different meanings (alter and altar, for example). I like these types of stories but hate the shoddy grammar spelling and punctuation of these ******* writers. I get that for a writer whose language is one other than English there are nuances that can be missed or over looked. However, it is no excuse for not learning how to write well. Get and editor, a better translation aid, or spend time learning the language and write well. There really is no excuse.
Collection of Monster Girls
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Is that so? I always make sure to write a word correctly to be sure it's not spelled wrong. My grammar sometimes has its faults; I'll never deny it, but I think it's still okay as long as it's readable, after all, I do not make these stories professionally. I'm still learning and my writing sure has many wrongs and faults. I guess I just never had anyone tell me before how bad it really was. You said you like these kind of stories, so I'm sure you do not have any problems with it, except of course, the way I write and such. If I have time, I'll make sure to learn. I only experienced English with games and online interactions, so I don't really think I have the skills to write professionally, which I guess you expect to see from a writer here in this site. Nonetheless, I'm happy to see this criticism. I'm happy to learn from it. I always wanted to know what readers actually think of my writing skills(not just the stories), so I'm actually trilled. I'll make sure to improve. I just wanted to defend myself and say that the reason to this problem is actually my lack of experience. As of now, I only write these stories as a hobby. I like to share it to the others and myself as well. I'm sure I'm also constantly improving, so soon, I want to be more confident with the way I write.