Dear author, I was/am still a huge fan of this book, due to its in depth world building and good story (at least at first). The problem I’ facing and I read a lot of comments feeling the same way, is that you introduce way to many characters and I mean WAY to many. The pov switches literally every chapter and it feels like the characters are in the 1000s at this point, to the point that I’d probably would need a list next to it to remember them all. Especially as this a chapter updating novel and you come back after some days and don’t remember anything. At the moment I’m skipping to most parts until we finally see the MC again every 10 chapters. I reall liked this novel and I’m saddened to see it like this :(
KevinAscending
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LIKEWell said. The constant POV changes are killing the story to the point that it all feels like filler until we see the mc pop in for one chapter then he’s missing for another 20. I think most of not all readers can agree that the mc is more elusive to the readers then he is to the characters in the story.