Mc was trained as an assassin since birth but somehow he is the biggest jokester and doesn’t take anything serious and just isn’t smart lol started off good but then once he left the temple it started getting worse
Kash_108
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LIKEThe mc is not another Bruce Wayne, he isn’t going to be a super serious guy, he is a teenager with a sense of humor, if you don’t like that read some other story with a harem and a super edgy mc. Our mc is in no way an idiot, he is learning from his mistakes like a HUMAN, my characters aren’t perfect, they’re people with flaws. Go somewhere else with a perfect, edgy, womanizing, mc.
I don’t like fanfics like that lol but if someone is trained to be an assassin and groomed to be the heir he would not be acting like a child he would act more like a Damien but better and his powers are supposed to make him evolve and somehow he’s nerfed.... just saying don’t give someone a backstory if it has no use to their story or personality on this case
DarthVegito:I don’t like fanfics like that lol but if someone is trained to be an assassin and groomed to be the heir he would not be acting like a child he would act more like a Damien but better and his powers are supposed to make him evolve and somehow he’s nerfed.... just saying don’t give someone a backstory if it has no use to their story or personality on this case
DarthVegito:I don’t like fanfics like that lol but if someone is trained to be an assassin and groomed to be the heir he would not be acting like a child he would act more like a Damien but better and his powers are supposed to make him evolve and somehow he’s nerfed.... just saying don’t give someone a backstory if it has no use to their story or personality on this case
I bet a super edgy MC would be more interesting than this story 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 But, aye, mad respect for not deleting these low reviews
Kash_108:The mc is not another Bruce Wayne, he isn’t going to be a super serious guy, he is a teenager with a sense of humor, if you don’t like that read some other story with a harem and a super edgy mc. Our mc is in no way an idiot, he is learning from his mistakes like a HUMAN, my characters aren’t perfect, they’re people with flaws. Go somewhere else with a perfect, edgy, womanizing, mc.
I’m no pussy. Again sorry you feel that way, but you can take your negativity elsewhere. If you don’t like the story leave, however the next time you trash my story I’m going to comeback.
IPreferLonerMc:I bet a super edgy MC would be more interesting than this story 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 But, aye, mad respect for not deleting these low reviews
Comeback with what tho???? 💀💀💀. And what negativity? 😂😂. I ain’t even trash talk this story, I trash talked on your personality and how you say “go read spider edgy mc” to both -3 reviews 😂😂😂
Kash_108:I’m no pussy. Again sorry you feel that way, but you can take your negativity elsewhere. If you don’t like the story leave, however the next time you trash my story I’m going to comeback.
I simply said that if they didn’t like what I was writing they can read something else from the millions of fics and novels on this site.
IPreferLonerMc:Comeback with what tho???? 💀💀💀. And what negativity? 😂😂. I ain’t even trash talk this story, I trash talked on your personality and how you say “go read spider edgy mc” to both -3 reviews 😂😂😂
Kash_108:I simply said that if they didn’t like what I was writing they can read something else from the millions of fics and novels on this site.
Yeah, reviews that aren’t even valid as the dude himself said he made a review based on hate comments. My other negative review at least had a valid point.
IPreferLonerMc:Exactly, and they left reviews for others who might have found this 🤦🏻♂️😂😂😂
Kash_108:Yeah, reviews that aren’t even valid as the dude himself said he made a review based on hate comments. My other negative review at least had a valid point.
Bro you real silent now. Say something else please. I hope someday you find that validation that you’re so desperately lacking. Maybe someday you’ll move out of your mothers basement and acquire the achievement “Life”.
IPreferLonerMc:Aye, it’s whatever, I’m having fun trash talking 😂😂😂
Chill 😂😂😂😂 I was out checking some novels to read, I don’t know what you want me to say 😂😂😂😂 I hope I get some validation too, lmfaooo 😂😂😂😂 This whole convo got me grinning so much 🤡😂😂😂😂
Kash_108:Bro you real silent now. Say something else please. I hope someday you find that validation that you’re so desperately lacking. Maybe someday you’ll move out of your mothers basement and acquire the achievement “Life”.
And I’m not even over the legal age, so that “comeback” doesn’t really work on me, lmfaoooo, mother’s basement, people still say that? Lmfaooo 🤡🤡🤡🤡
Kash_108:Bro you real silent now. Say something else please. I hope someday you find that validation that you’re so desperately lacking. Maybe someday you’ll move out of your mothers basement and acquire the achievement “Life”.
Aye you know who else grins? 🤡 Alright I’m done arguing with a troll, I got better things to do than waste my time on a basement dweller.
IPreferLonerMc:Chill 😂😂😂😂 I was out checking some novels to read, I don’t know what you want me to say 😂😂😂😂 I hope I get some validation too, lmfaooo 😂😂😂😂 This whole convo got me grinning so much 🤡😂😂😂😂
Kash_108:So you’re simply a troll? If so then I can respond trashing you?
IPreferLonerMc:And I’m not even over the legal age, so that “comeback” doesn’t really work on me, lmfaoooo, mother’s basement, people still say that? Lmfaooo 🤡🤡🤡🤡
My family is too broke to afford a house with a basement 😂😂😂 but thanks for the compliment 😂😂😂😂. Clowns do be grinning doe 🤡🤡🤡🤡 How much time have you wasted on me tho??? Lmfaooo, dude really took +5 minutes to talk with me 😂😂😂😂. Shiiii, I’d be mad too
Kash_108:Aye you know who else grins? 🤡 Alright I’m done arguing with a troll, I got better things to do than waste my time on a basement dweller.