Oh my.....look first off, the title is stupid,,,white swan dosnt intimidate anyone....
Now for the story, like there not much plot right, but ****, this one chp might probably be one of the greatest chps I've read,,,the english, the grammar and the content it in, including the characters character?.
.its gold, and me saying this is something, cause I've read author dudes other book, its nice but I thought it was stupid.
The story, seems to be AU, there are more characters here, ex: like I think here there are more than 5 national level hunters...so yah...as for the MC, I dont really know who he is cause there wasnt any moments of MC mentioned, but I think there might be two of em,they might be bros,,,
author man, a suggestion,,,,make only one MC, cause its better,,,but you do you.
Either way, the stories actually done well, meaning its foundation is dope, so it has potential.
not much so generic suggestion: Only one MC,,,,smart MC, OP MC, hide his powers and ****...add some romance, just build it,,,no shallow ****, or useless chicks,,,make em loyal an helpful.
**: I know this isnt an actual review, but ****, the first chp got me..and all I can say is, if this continues....it'll be dope