Review Detail of prasanna10 in An ton's Journey ( StarCraft + other worlds)

Come on! !! !! !! What have you done. Its like you shot your own feet. The start was so awesome until sw and hp, but then you killed it slowly. You officially got the license to kill you 007(not a compliment) .. Rewrite it from the part of the end of hp. Connect all the previous stories It is good if mc makes mistakes but don't let them seems like donkey mistakes. REWRITE!!!!!!! HERE ARE FIVE STARS FOR THE MOTIVATION FOR IT.