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DeadHawk
DeadHawkLv13yr
2021-08-24 12:21

I tried going past chapter 44 and made it to 47 but I just couldn't keep reading it. It got to be so boring and really weird. I would say it's worth checking out since it's not that bad though. The story development kinda falls off after a bit though. The MC is about the dumbest person possible who acts like he can do anything with no consequences so it's literally unbearable to read anymore.

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RionSteiner
RionSteinerLv5

At first It was exciting to read this fic coz it was Starcraft in Starwars verse but as the fic goes on, for me its hard to understand and became convoluted at some point. I first thought like Starcraft game, build base, produce units, gather materials, buy heroes and again and again until he has enough manpower, that how I think he became powerhouse in Star Wars and build his own Empire or planet something typical kingdom building. But its not, author make it more realistic with little game mechanic on it. That's turn me off a little bit. I know its good to be careful but author make protoss careful at some point they look weak on some reader standpoint in order to hide they so called technologies and manpower to the point they were harass by other forces in galaxy and they do nothing and ignore just them. No showing a little power there so that they establish themselves as race that you can't mess around with. Sucks tho good thing author tells that MC has no skills in playing the war. It feels like the MC only there to summon the units and heroes in Starcraft to Starwars and let them be. Feels like he has no real power there and he only respect or follow by heroes because he summoned them and that's what their mind says like protocol other than that feels like MC before reincarnated didn't play Starcraft and only watching in sideline while someone playing Starcraft on some Internet cafe. And then comes down the latest chapter when he became Zerg, the Star Wars and Protoss arc didn't finish yet then MC became Zero in the process out of nowhere. Story development sucks to me especially I played Starcraft since launch. Well its my opinion anyway and heads up on future readers what to expect and what's inside this fanfic, goodluck anyway. This constructive criticism if authors weak minded will be deleted so does the rating I put on this fic cause that what it feels like it when I read this fic until latest chapter. What a letdown.

Nimav
NimavLv13

Time for a more recent review: It's very good in some aspects, ignoring spelling and some grammar, it's quite good as a narrative and plausible given that you are a neutral reader regarding some aspects which I will cover next. The MC is difficult, his decisionmaking skills are iffy and his memory is very short even outside of situations where these aspects are logically impaired to some extent. It can only be explained as him simply having a lower than average IQ. Not a criticism per se, but rather a warning for any new readers trying to get into this, as this type of MC is not for everyone. Non-tag warning: it becomes a partial gender-bender later on but the author threw some explanations and excuses in the comments about it being more of a joke. It's ongoing over a lot of chapters until it actually turns into a full-on biological conversion as detected by in-world forces at one point, so excuses that it's a joke, he's forced by external factors and it's not real conversion as long as the MC 'prefers' male no longer hold water for not properly tagging it. It seems more like the author is simply too deep in the closet to take pride and admit his cross-gender affinities, at least with a proper tag or mention in the work's description. I'm not a fan of gender-benders, but I still watched Ranma 1/2 way back because there was proper comedy about it. I even read a Ranma x SW fanfic which was very entertaining. In the case of this fic it feels more like shaming the genre by trying to be clandestine or defensive about it.

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