Honestly didn't like it, typical cringe harem stuff, main character not really memorable, will probably forget about this story in 2 days. Really boring to read, a mc to whom everything will always go right and he's also going to be op. Girls fall in love during the 1st meeting. Doesn't bring any freshness to fanfics. Probably just my taste, but I think stories like these are bland.
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Thanks for the review, I appreciate that you took time out of your day to write this. I truly do hope that the next story I write will suit your taste and everyone else’s who doesn’t like harem. If you do read this I hope you can let me know on how I could improve for the future and make better content:)
take this with a grain of salt....... CD..character development,,,,CD as in character relationships and interactions,,,build em...dont force em to fall in love with MC like some sluts, build their characters, show character interaction and ****,.....dont rush it.. MC OP is always is dope BUT the way he uses it should be interesting..ex: moments where he uses brain to crush enemies is better, ofcourse moments where he one shots enemies is also dope ..BUT most of the time make him hide his power, and not show off. Dont make MC an man whore that goes after moms and wives and dont make lovers basic or easy women or some cliche " humph", "humph" going being...build their personality.. Interesting powers....an OP power BUT needs MC to be smart, like illusions power...or anything
Damz:Thanks for the review, I appreciate that you took time out of your day to write this. I truly do hope that the next story I write will suit your taste and everyone else’s who doesn’t like harem. If you do read this I hope you can let me know on how I could improve for the future and make better content:)
