140 word count is killing me dammit this is the best novel I’ve read in a long time it’s very well written the story is great but the best part of all is the author he’s constantly improving at first the fight scenes were utter trash but by the end of what’s currently released it’s flawless beautiful perfect you can tell with every new chapter the author is getting better at writing and constantly trying to improve his work though I will say that the description is a little bit misleading in the beginning he’s not the arrogant young master I expecting it’s a bit more comedic and not as serious as I would’ve thought however it is definitely enjoyable and a beautifully written story I recommend reading it to everybody who enjoys character development and isn’t someone who enjoys trash garbage cliché novels also I wrote this entire thing in voice type so there’s no punctuation sorry and probably some spelling errors because I’m using a phone don’t have time to type all of this but I will be waiting for the next chapters with bated breath thank you author for this masterpiece much love also I only gave the world building four stars because it feels like somethings are not properly explained and sometimes there’s an occasional info dump however even the info dump so well written with a little bit of personality like it’s an actual book instead of just stats For example in the later chapters alchemy is just too explained in my opinion there’s like an entire chapter devoted how it works it’s not unbearable and that’s just about the only thing that bothered me but other than that everything’s great that was only one chapter if not for that I would give this a five out of five stars hands-down
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