In my honest opinion, this is a really great webnovel. There may be some grammatical errors every know and then, but the excellence of the story makes up for it. I really like how you explained the Dao system and the devil hierarchy. I like specific and concise explanations, so that really made the story a whole lot better. Plus, I can actually feel the evilness in the characters. So far, James is amazing. Sure the plot can take long at times, but it will get better.
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