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f0Ri5
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I wish I could give this a higher score... The idea of this story is interesting. The Mc is starting a zombie apocalypse, kind of. Too bad its not very good. Characters are bland, plot developments aren't very interesting. Overall just kind of a dull story, really.

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The God of the Undead

ThatFroggyBastard

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ThatFroggyBastard
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Thanks for the review. This is more of a novel to help me get use to writing.

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ThatFroggyBastardAuthorThatFroggyBastard

Out of long and thorough thought and consideration I've come to the conclusion to add the things from your critic

ThatFroggyBastard:Thanks for the review. This is more of a novel to help me get use to writing.
f0Ri5
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If it's your first time writing, don't take my crtisims too seriously. Having an interesting idea is half the battle, which you definitely do. This kind of novel has the potential to do really well. Zombie apocalypse stuff has been done to death, so if you can put an interesting spin on it from the opposite perspective I think people will really like it. Particularly, showing the pov of the mc vs 'normal people' is essential to show the reader how things are unfolding. The 'enemy' characters are not bad, but it will be difficult to make them feel 'authentic' since you are writing modern people and not some weird fantasy world characters. The main gripe is on the Mc side - the system, gods, fairy sidekick, that stuff is kinda weird and just feels messy. Doesn't belong in this story but that's just my opinion. I like the idea of him making an undead family. It has a lot of potential, with him 'remaking' fellow unfortunate people into undead. Not much more to say, I probably won't stick with it but I have seen worse novels succeed so GL.

Iomic
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The book was great i don’t know what you mean 3 stars it should be 5 stars