Review Detail of rosaserenity in I, The Villainess [Dropped/Going to Rewrite]

Hello! This is my first time writing a story, so there’s most likely quite a few mistakes here and there. (Hence my average rating.) I hope that you’ll all enjoy this \(^v^)/ Feel free to give me a review — good or bad. Constructive criticism would be appreciated too! And please tell me how my writing is >~< Thank you for picking up this book!