I don’t really like it. I was initially excited to read but after the whole “order” thing was unfolded I immediately knew it was going to be like one of those uninteresting ‘Tween’ books Americans like so much lately. I don’t like Max. Specifically cause she has a boyfriend. It’s like why make her the main female lead if she already has a boyfriend? What kind of NTR sh!t is that? And even if they got together later it’s like na Ho you were already with this other guy I don’t want the Mc to get sloppy seconds. I feel a underlying disgust for this one sided crush, it just makes him feel like a bit of a ‘simp’ ( for a lack of better words) Just me though. I can already see the angry reply’s now. It’s fine it’s just how I feel. Besides that the grammar is great, don’t like any of the characters or backgrounds secret group stuff . Can’t really say any other positive things. Keep writing though author, though I don’t like your stories it’s not like my opinion matters a lot, considering most of your reviews are positive. You obviously have an audience so I hope you succeed in your endeavors.
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