I'm ngl the story seems pretty good, just fix a couple of grammar mistakes and please, for the love of god, don't turn the MC into a psychopath I've seen this happen several times where the MC turned from evil to psychotic
AinzSama
Liked it!
Ty for ur reply. Between psychotic and evil is small extent but I'll do my best.
Dont listen to him author. Keep him evil and psychotic im loving it
AinzSama:Ty for ur reply. Between psychotic and evil is small extent but I'll do my best.