Review Detail of amaturewriter in The Broken System - One Piece

Dear author.........character development is a major pillar of a story..without it....the stories garbage....like what happened?...in cho 1 it was 4/10 but then it just went to zero...like theres zero CD and SD.....the MC is bland and so are all the other characters..like this isnt a bash,,,its just that the SD, CD and even WQ are barely present