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GABaller
GABallerLv133yrGABaller

I haven't read the story but I wanted to give the author feedback regarding the synopsis, or lack thereof. I get that writing a synopsis can be hard, but that's no excuse for not having one. What you've got right now completely lacks any information regarding what this story is actually about. It doesn't even introduce the character in any meaningful way. After reading what's there, I have no idea what to expect, and as such I have no desire to take a random chance when my time could be better spent playing Warframe, Jedi Fallen Order, or Destiny 2. A synopsis is a sales pitch, and right not I don't even know what you're selling.

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Death system

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Axes
AxesLv5Axes

True that but those are some Ugly games :(

GABaller
GABallerLv13GABaller

They're time killers. Would you prefer STALKER, Sleeping Dogs, or Hellblade: Senua's Sacrifice?