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RandomGuy
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Hai! A shameless five stars review by myself. For you who love reading my story, thank you so much! And for those who still hesitating if you should give it it a try or not, well, don't hesitate anymore, give it a try! But if it's not your taste, then I'm so sorry for that. And for those who frustrated with how the grammars were, how the wording were, or even wanted to give some suggestions on how the story would develop, please give some comments in the comment section, I will always read every comments of you guys! Last but not least, please have a good read! :)

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Death system

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Benzalo
BenzaloLv11Benzalo

Any romance?

RandomGuy
RandomGuyAuthorRandomGuy

Hai, not for now but it might later on. I have yet decided if I sud add romance considering my MC past :)

Benzalo:Any romance?
Worn_out_by
Worn_out_byLv15Worn_out_by

Question ablut to try out your story is the MC like his name implies vengful maybe or whats the main attitude of him? Sorry if not typed out very well

RandomGuy:Hai, not for now but it might later on. I have yet decided if I sud add romance considering my MC past :)
RandomGuy
RandomGuyAuthorRandomGuy

umm... I'm sorry but i don't understand ! what you try to say, my friend ? 😅

Worn_out_by:Question ablut to try out your story is the MC like his name implies vengful maybe or whats the main attitude of him? Sorry if not typed out very well
Usagi_mofu
Usagi_mofuLv11Usagi_mofu

I didn't read the novel, but author, please change the name of your novel to: Death System. Basically begin the second word with a capital letter please. Author: Death system Me: Death System

RandomGuy
RandomGuyAuthorRandomGuy

Unfortunately, I can't. looks like Webnovel won't let me edit the title after i clicked 'publish.' So, I would stuck with that title forever apparently

Usagi_mofu:I didn't read the novel, but author, please change the name of your novel to: Death System. Basically begin the second word with a capital letter please. Author: Death system Me: Death System
Crazy_Beast
Crazy_BeastLv3Crazy_Beast

Can't you change it

Crazy_Beast
Crazy_BeastLv3Crazy_Beast

Can't you change it

StukoVRusso
StukoVRussoLv4StukoVRusso

Please, get a proofreader to help you with the grammar. I would like to read this novel, i really do,but i can't bring myself to read it with all the typos, weird wording and such.

JudgefulCat
JudgefulCatLv5JudgefulCat

Just wanna make sure before i start reading this Will this be dropped at some point or are you an author with dedication and passion to write?

RandomGuy
RandomGuyAuthorRandomGuy

I'll definitely finish it one day

JudgefulCat:Just wanna make sure before i start reading this Will this be dropped at some point or are you an author with dedication and passion to write?
Ghoulxs
GhoulxsLv2Ghoulxs

Get grammarly. its free, It’ll be a resplendent auxiliary

RandomGuy:Hai, not for now but it might later on. I have yet decided if I sud add romance considering my MC past :)
Chidubem_Mark_1460
Chidubem_Mark_1460Lv2Chidubem_Mark_1460

Then why the 7 month's hiatus leaving us high and dry

RandomGuy:I'll definitely finish it one day
Marz007
Marz007Lv5Marz007

Ok here's a question right out of left field will the MC be gay and will the story be a BL type of story ?