Review Detail of Fir3Cooz in The Black Dragon King of the Void [Stopped]

First of all I haven’t even bothered to attempt to read this story, no-offence meant btw, because of all the negative reviews about NTR and what-not. I have also seen your replies to those reviews which is basically what you have said above but if so many people are saying that there is a issue there and they are all saying the same thing, then either what they are saying is true or you didn’t make what really happened clear enough but frankly from what I have seen throughout the reviews about the topic, the marriage in question was unnecessary since no heir came about from it, which is basically the whole point of marriages like that, to make heir to join the kingdoms together. If you really wanted to go down this path then I saw a story on a different website that dealt with it by giving the woman an item that made other men feel that she was unattractive so she would be safe from a superior enemy that wanted to use her for more political power. I also have an issue with you talking about people judging the book “too soon”. If people don’t like the beginning of your story so much they aren’t going to waste their time reading the rest or waiting for you to update, thats basically a standard that should be expected, the start is probably the most important part because it’s supposed to draw people in. Anyway I have said enough, hope you learn something from this, good luck.

It doesnt matter how good story will become in future if fuc.k up begining.Beginings should draw ppl to want read more, and not to disgust them from story.No one will want to read story that shows trash mc.Such things show that person author is and that he will make many simmilar or other situations.Maybe not ntr but that u will make up stupid decisions to preserve canon.Such stories are labelled trash by ppl and wont bother to read more as its just waste of time.