Review Detail of iAmJaMz in Restarting Life In Another World

The story is lacking in emotion. I feel the MC is just a third party making comments. It's like He's not the MC but rather a side character. I'm pretty sure a side character has spoken more then he has. He also doesn't have any noticeable personality. He's kinda dumb really. All the characters are really. Their like children, even though their at least 15. It's like they can't think for themselves. Example being when asked why to become a adventurer. It all seems forced in the plot, like their forced to not think. I've only read till chapter 30 but you I see no change in the story that has hooked me. The only selling point is the genre and him potentially being a dragonking. But even that is not enough of a selling point with no fleshed out character development or world development. The only reason I've not given it a 1 star is because I didn't read the full story, but I just couldn't. 30 straight chapters with nothing interesting happening. Yeah no. Another reason is because I commend your effort you at least put in making the story. Good luck though and hope you improve.