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Noih0
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I liked what I have read till now but as this gerne is not new so I won't say anything about that but if you can do something that set it apart from other then it will be great but current status of it is looking good. P.S. Try to put inner monologue inside quotation mark.

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Restarting Life In Another World

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BRPever
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Thanks for the suggestions, I have added the monologue inside the quotation mark :)

Noih0
Noih0Lv11Noih0

That's great

BRPever:Thanks for the suggestions, I have added the monologue inside the quotation mark :)