Review Detail of IAmNotAWizard in Transmigrating through harry potter
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I dislike that Marie gets all this growth in the first arc and just me drugs it away. It would have been better if the emotion was temporarily locked away or had half the effect as you had written. Without the emotions of her time as Petunia, she will lose much of her character growth and the story development in the first arc will have been useless except for learning knowledge about the wizarding world.
Transmigrating through harry potter
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First of all thank you! thank you for being honest with me and telling me about what you dislike about the story. Second of all, I have had that in mind since I had rewritten it and thought about a limitation to the drug and how I could fix my mistake and make it a more whole rounded story (it will maybe come back in the end) Third of all, I truly appreciate the honesty it will help me grow and I super sorry I could not respond earlier but I got locked out of my account, I was not even able to upload my new chapters :(((