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Obviously English isn't author's primary language, but it doesn't deter words and sentences from getting the job done, nor affect readability too much. So, kudos there. I like how the author is meticulous and thorough in describing the scenes pictured in their head. Every objects and actions and dialogues all have purposes, implying certain information, instead of just existing to fill blank lines. The story, basically, is a screenplay written out in a novel format. I wouldn't be surprised if author found the screenplay format more comfortable.

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

Thanks! I will review yours later on....thank you for appreciating my effort to create my novel. I visualize my novel like a game or a movie or anime. I wanted it to have that much quality. Welp still far to my goal. Thanks for reading it![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

Does screenplay in a novel format good? or bad?

Nullabutton
NullabuttonLv3Nullabutton

Hello, in order not to take up too much space on this review page, I replied in your forum thread instead.

Mel_Aniv:Does screenplay in a novel format good? or bad?
Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

Thank's! my doubts and anxiety cleared up a bit. I feel good now! Thanks for explaining further.

Nullabutton:Hello, in order not to take up too much space on this review page, I replied in your forum thread instead.