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Hello, Author! Writing Quality: So far, it's decent and understandable, and you write good descriptions. But there are instances like you shouldn't put a comma after a quote, you should put it before the quote ends, for example: "I like this," said John instead of "I like this.", said John. You should use a single quote (') if you want to write the thoughts of the character in mind, for example: 'Why did father teach me?' instead of "Why did father teach me?" I believe in improvement, so I believe in you! Stability of Updates: For me, just update if you're willing or ready. Don't be pressured to update if you really, really can't. Story Development: I don't know how will the story unfold, but it's looking great so far! Character Design: You can distinguish who's who, so you wouldn't have a difficult time adjusting. World Background: I have no idea about some gun's name, so it's pretty cool to learn those names in here. This is a hidden gem, so you should read it if you're a fan of a slow-paced, episodic-like, seeing character interactions, action, and survival. Although you're not a fan of those, I think this is still worth reading. I hope you'll find success in this story! I'll continue to read this, so it stays in my library!