Narration: 5/5 Worldbuilding: The protagonist reading the books to learn about the world was a great way to introduce it to them. Dialogues: Realistic. I like the family setting for his beginning. It helps paint a picture of how the protagonist becomes the way he is. Pacing: Not fast, not too slow. I like these types of pacing, so you can actually stop and learn about the characters and the world they live in. Writing quality: Awesome! Execution of the Genre: Nice Job! Story potential: Very High! Final thoughts: I expected something to go wrong for the protag. You fooled me into thinking he could handle the situation and ended it with an unexpected twist. Well Done!
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