It's good I liked the long chapters. You did a good job shifting the personalities of the characters to match the story being told, instead of using the characters as constants in the story its probably pretty easy to use the excuse (that's what the characters would do because that's what they did). You instead used the characters as templates for the characters you created. and I can assure you that you have created a new Naruto, Sasuke, and Sakura, they are different enough from the original characters that they should be their own characters.
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