First off, this is not really my kind of story, but even so I definitely don't think it is bad by any measure, just not for me. To clarify, I don't mind dragon ball fics, but for me, dragon ball does not mesh well for crossovers, but I am not everyone and wont fault a story for not being to my personal tastes. Anyway, the main flaw I saw was a good number of typos, but I was able to figure out what they were supposed to say, so I was generous for that reason and gave 4 stars on writing quality and 5 on the other aspects. Good luck.
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