Great story, well paced, not much fluff (so far). However, a few points are preventing me from continuing: - -Its emphasis on purity culture is exhausting. As though a woman can be literally degraded by enjoying a biological imperative. I don’t like it, even if it’s only hurting the villains. -The fl’s body is 15 yrs old. It’s gross for her to be considered by the ml - he doesn’t know she’s mentally older, he’s looking at a child with barely a toe into adulthood. Makes him pervy. -If the story needs them to be married just let them get married, or better yet, make her body old enough for this to be appropriate. Why all this drama about doing it for the greater good? Maybe I’m just over of the unending stories and implication that a woman has to be married to have “relations” but cannot get married until it’s established that she’s not really interested in said relations. -also the ml literally has a woman SAed regularly. Doesn’t matter if she’s a villain. There’s barely a mention of the emotional devastation that would follow, only the social implications and her loss of “qualification” for good marriage. Tsk.
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