Hey sempai, its me. I would like to apologies that I am sorry that I read only 5 chapters. Yes that is bad but due to the lack of time and most of excruciating of all, my slow reading. Ok on with the actual review. Let us start with the beginning. The story picks up with our MC Yilas (which I presumed to be our Female Lead). The start was... kinda confusing but I got the hang of it in later chapters. The world building is what I am more intrigued about. It features anthropomorphic characters and no I will not call them Furries because they are two different things if your one of my meme friends. (F*** you, Jerry, you ruined zootopia!). The "magic-system" which I like to call or energy cultivation if you want to stay true to the storyline. Is fascinating. It feels like Harry Potter/ Berry Hooters. It has also the chosen one genre which is quite typical for any writer to start. I still need to read MOAR! In terms of writing quality, it could used a bit of polishing here and there. But overall, still solid. At least for the most part. As for character design well its good and sempai, bruh. You describing how hot Viosus is more akin to me describing how beautiful saint Celestine. (Which she is, Jerry!) Anyway, all in all good book series but it still needs more development. P.S. sorry about giving you a 4.4.
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LIKEcecemagic_sempai:Tysm for the honest review. Now I can improve even more! I appreciate it!
A good chuckle lmao, from your writing I am not surprise tho. I also think the reference is on point *insert me shamelessly crying here*
Trajann_Augustus:Your welcome but did you giggled at my review? I did my best to make it funny
cecemagic_sempai:A good chuckle lmao, from your writing I am not surprise tho. I also think the reference is on point *insert me shamelessly crying here*