The beginning was tragic, and I found myself immersed by such good start. As the chapters progressed it gets lighter, even comical. I do notice some grammatical issues (tenses and punctuation) so I advice the author to proofread. It’s a promising read, especially to those who likes the genre. Keep up the good work.
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