Review Detail of Edward98 in Pioneer of Ascension
Review detail
It would be amazing if the pace wasn’t so f***ing slow! It would all need some major rewriting cutting all lines that don’t add anything to the story (that are many). And let’s not talk about some endless fightscene (this part is opinable the former is not). Overall I still gave 5 stars b/c for the standards of webnovel it would deserve even 6 stars
Pioneer of Ascension
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Thanks for the feedback :) If you're still reading the novel, would you mind letting me know either here or on discord if you find the pacing and writing better in more recent chapters? I've tried improving on those quite a bit since the early days, but as the one who wrote it, it's hard to know if something is lacking until a month later when I'm a better writer and can judge it properly.
I’m at chpt 69, I’ll let u know when I finish it. Btw 3 more things: - in the first chapters 13 thoughts don’t sound like a child at all - it would be nice to know which attribute each character unlock, it’s always satisfying seeing the characters getting stronger especially if you feel like it’s deserved and earned. So not saying it after all the time they spendt training is avoiding an easy way to let the reader feel gratifications - u should repeat some names and specific information more often, especially if they are brought up again later on.
Chalky:Thanks for the feedback :) If you're still reading the novel, would you mind letting me know either here or on discord if you find the pacing and writing better in more recent chapters? I've tried improving on those quite a bit since the early days, but as the one who wrote it, it's hard to know if something is lacking until a month later when I'm a better writer and can judge it properly.
Yeah, the beginning requires some suspension of disbelief for sure, bad choices in the start still haunt me now. As for the rest, I'll try to keep that in mind as I write, thanks :)
Edward98:I’m at chpt 69, I’ll let u know when I finish it. Btw 3 more things: - in the first chapters 13 thoughts don’t sound like a child at all - it would be nice to know which attribute each character unlock, it’s always satisfying seeing the characters getting stronger especially if you feel like it’s deserved and earned. So not saying it after all the time they spendt training is avoiding an easy way to let the reader feel gratifications - u should repeat some names and specific information more often, especially if they are brought up again later on.