Review Detail of Lazybeep in Pioneer of Ascension
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I have read this till chapter 24 and have quite liked the way this story is developing and can see it's potential. Character till now is neither all powerfull nor has a cheat system till now atleast. Although I understand this is still early however I hope atleast few of the below thing could be made somewhat more clear 1. World background - we only know that his kingdom is at war with an alliance. Since the mc is still young he might not need to know but still a background would give more context and what mc is acutally being prepared for. 2. side character - apart from their you still get to know quite less abt their personality or background 3. Martial system - still not clear with the levels and type
Pioneer of Ascension
Chalky
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Hey there Aygarg, I'm not sure if you're still reading, but I'd just like you to know that I took your feedback on board and have developed each of those aspects further and will continue to do so as the story progresses. World background in particular will be developed even further as our protagonist ventures out and learns of the nuances behind the current state of things.
Hey chalky yeah i am still quite hooked to this and enjoy how you have gradually giving out more info based on mc needs.
Chalky:Hey there Aygarg, I'm not sure if you're still reading, but I'd just like you to know that I took your feedback on board and have developed each of those aspects further and will continue to do so as the story progresses. World background in particular will be developed even further as our protagonist ventures out and learns of the nuances behind the current state of things.