Review Detail of seiryuuwife in The King's Beloved

Item: The King's Beloved
Rating: 3.8

Review detail

seiryuuwifeLv113yrseiryuuwife

Having read most of the free chapters of this novel, I feel the story is obviously well thought out and well written. Apart from this though, it’s very shoujo and innocently portayed. The characters give the impressions of being a bit one dimensional. The FL might be the most Mary Sue-ish character I’ve encountered. She’s kind, extremely beautiful, clever, intelligent, strong, lucky, humble, introspective, talented and makes friends easily.

The King's Beloved

Macy_Bae

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Macy_BaeAuthorMacy_Bae

Thank you so much for your feedback! This is my first story and I'll keep on working hard to write better stories and improve! <3

3yr

seiryuuwifeLv11seiryuuwife

You’re welcome. Learning is a process and I look forward to your future work.

Macy_Bae:Thank you so much for your feedback! This is my first story and I'll keep on working hard to write better stories and improve! <3

3yr

Macy_BaeAuthorMacy_Bae

Yes! Thank you!!

seiryuuwife:You’re welcome. Learning is a process and I look forward to your future work.

3yr