Review Detail of kanau in A Chance To Be With You

story progresses well, characters have depth and are likeable The only thing is that the writing should be in past tense since the story is written in third person. e.g. She jumped up from her seat and waved happily at him instead of: She jumps up from her seat and waves happily at him which was how most of the story was written, so I had to correct the grammar in my mind while reading the story. Other than that, the story had a good flow and the content was well written *came from 'Destined to Be a Black Pen' which is a great book too