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MochiCat
MochiCatLv44yr
2020-10-07 02:42

Hmm. I doubt my comment will be viewed by many people but for those who do see this maybe you might be wondering why this rating is one of the lowest in a sea of 4.5 - 5 star reviews. The answer to that my friends is that this story is just so unrealistic lol. I honestly laughed more times than I could count on the sheer number of instances the author had to describe how “cool”, awesome, and bad*ss the FL was. Sure, the FL can be a strong and capable woman (who doesn’t love reading about them?) but c’mon now, does the FL have to be the best hacker, the best doctor, the best fighter, the best lawyer, etc.? Basically she has a variety of different jobs in various professional fields and she’s the best at all of them. With a snap of her finger all problems faced will be solved. If a character starts out too OP, it gives them a lack of dimension because they aren’t given situations to grow and develop in a way that is readers can relate to. This is just my PERSONAL OPINION though, please don’t get it twisted. I’m not discouraging people from reading this. In fact, I highly encourage people to read and form their own opinions on this. I’m just voicing my thoughts and you can respectfully disagree with them if you enjoy reading books with OP characters that don’t face any challenges because they are just so bad*ss. I might continue reading this, or I might not. Who knows.

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Ammar_Sani
Ammar_SaniLv2

Really?? and here I am wanting to read it but stopped but i'll try it anyway lo. can you review The birth of a villainess ? I thing youknow those things lol

shin123456
shin123456Lv2

I READ THAT! IT WAS COOL AND THE AUTHORS OTHER NOVEL MY VILLAINOUS WIFE IS ALSO AMWAYZING <3

Ammar_Sani:Really?? and here I am wanting to read it but stopped but i'll try it anyway lo. can you review The birth of a villainess ? I thing youknow those things lol
Pekonut
PekonutLv4

definitely don't read it if you prefer character growth. this novel focuses more on the plot and character interactions.

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VeRose
VeRoseLv13

⚠️Spoiler Alert⚠️ This is only my personal view. You might be wondering why I would give such a good story a low rating. Yes, I admit that the story is really good but it's too similar to Ma'am You Have Been Uncovered. Not exactly the same but the concept almost 50-70% the same. This novel is still ongoing and the latest update is around chapter 700+. Meanwhile, Ma'am You've Been Uncovered already finished around March-April this year. Which point that are similiar? 1. FL (Gu Mang) is a genius and talented person who hides most of her ability and pretend to be a 'problematic teenager'. FL has the same cold, uninterested, lazy, short-tempered attitude but cares toward only those who are close to her. She has multiple identitie and abilities (top doctor, hacker, lawyer, high fighting ability, etc). She also knows so many big-shots in respective area. She presses down her irrability and agitated mood using lollipop and other sweet food (including milk tea). She also smokes😑. She's a white lotus sister too. 2. FL's bestfriend (Meng Jinyang) also had an accident back in her younger day. She saved by FL and FL did her best to saved her; physically and mentally. 3. ML is the same handsome, cold, mystetious, and only cares toward FL. He's also a big-shot that hides his real identity too. He smokes too 😑 4. The way the story progress is somewhat similar. It's not that similar but gave off the same vibe as MYBU. I'm just voicing my opinion and not accusing the author. Of course I will still read this story as it has my go-to genre.

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