Review Detail of churima in The Almighty Rich Daughter is Explosively Cool！

The story's development from the start is awesome. However, I felt like the last part was hastily done. I advise the author to review the other parts because some characters became out of their character as well its plot. The whole concept is good but the way it was the plot was delivered if somewhat off-putting. There are still room for improvement. I hope the author will revise a little bit of this, a little bit of that. I find the first part brilliant and I'm just a little sad on the last part.