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DKILLER1
DKILLER1Lv44yr
2020-05-03 23:22

There's not much to give review as i already made it in comment section. Mostly i disliked about this novel is story development. It's feels like i'm reading a new story with only devil fruit from one piece & Yu-Gi-Oh system from Yu-Gi-Oh.

Yu-Gi-Oh System in One Piece

MagicParadise
4.5
79 Chs

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Sesshomaru7897
Sesshomaru7897Lv5

Haven't read it at all. But the title stood out? You may ask why, and I'll tell you, it's a great crossover. Exodia and devil fruit users both fail in the water.

4yr

Pavan1234
Pavan1234Lv5

Did not read it. I saw a review where that reviewer too didn't read the novel but gave a bad review. Gave this review to counter that. And to tell Author that his idea for this novel is not bad for all readers. 'Card game in One piece' is a unique idea in my opinion and is worth to give this try. I will write another review after reading this novel.

4yr
Victory_Road
Victory_RoadLv2

I have two complaints after reading this for a bit: 1°: Insta loyalty: The MC didn't earn his monsters loyalty, they just follow his lead for no reason, the way it is right now it feels like unearned power, all he has to be is a little lucky in his shop drawings and he becomes a top dog in the world, like I said, unearned. 2°: No theme: It would be cooler if the MC could ONLY get cards from an especific themed deck he choosed beforehand, for example an all dark spellcaster deck or a warrior deck, the way you are doing it feels all over the place and anything could come out of that shop, that means you will never have to work around a weakness because you have all the answers a shop draw distance away. Other than that great idea and story so far. ☺

4yr
ProSpect
ProSpectLv4

Not going to read any futher… a card game in OP ? yhea… no, maybe something else, but not an card game. ........................................

4yr
Mystogen
MystogenLv10

Starts of good. Then get shot. Does not focus on the mc. Just random **** that has no plot. . . . The authors had a good idea then he ruined it.

4yr
the_game01234567
the_game01234567Lv5

Pretty good work with the story development and character progression. The updates are reasonable (at least 1 a day on average). Although there is so many One Piece fanfic, this one stands out from the others.

4yr
FinzRaizer
FinzRaizerLv11

Writing Quality: Good, readable Stability of Updates: For now still good, many chapters a day Story Development: Not sure what to say... Neutral? Character Design: Kinda lacking I say, barely know any character except MC, many OC that also need to be developed if they kinda going to join MC World Background: Ehm... you should at least read or watch One Piece to know the world

4yr
Sakkaku_no_mori
Sakkaku_no_moriLv14

Reveal spoiler

4yr
Catrosious
CatrosiousLv4

So basically a monster summoner with a card .. well really festive ~

4yr
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