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Debojit_Debnath
Debojit_DebnathLv23yrDebojit_Debnath

W t h is going on.. the first chapter was chunky and so rushed... But this chapter is so cringe.. and the convo with the girls was so cringe. He was moved by their sincerity.. lol. He was betrayed in his past life and still so trusting of people.. the most cringe is when he introduces himself to the girls, he adds that he hates people who betrays and mentions that she is someone special when asked about it by them. The common sense is dissipating each second like how I am about to from here..

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Lumia: Other World

Mel_Aniv

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Debojit_Debnath
Debojit_DebnathLv2Debojit_Debnath

Thank you. I will try to read it again.. I am just too bored at home and not being able to find good books to read is frustrating.

Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivAuthorMel_Aniv

thanks for the review.....I get what you mean and I will keep it on mind.

Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivAuthorMel_Aniv

I've re edited it....by completely deleting their convo.

Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivAuthorMel_Aniv

Welp...try night ranger then...it will be an awesome read.

Debojit_Debnath:Thank you. I will try to read it again.. I am just too bored at home and not being able to find good books to read is frustrating.
Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivAuthorMel_Aniv

Or solo leveling or kill the hero....you are welcome.

Debojit_Debnath:Thank you. I will try to read it again.. I am just too bored at home and not being able to find good books to read is frustrating.