Review Detail of The_Canary in Lumia: Other World

Item: Lumia: Other World
Rating: 4

Review detail

The_CanaryLv43yrThe_Canary

Hello author-san! This is commend the author for writing a good narrative for this story. I was plunged into this unique world. I must say that it was fast paced, but I get it that the author wants the reader to dive in already into this new world. Keep up the good job!

Lumia: Other World

Mel_Aniv

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Mel_AnivAuthorMel_Aniv

Thank you for the review!....I must say that I did lack some points in grammar but I will try my best to tell my story in a good way. Thank you for the support and I hope you will read it till the end. By the way, I've improved my plot so it will be better later on.

3yr

Mel_AnivAuthorMel_Aniv

Please vote my new work The Grandmaster's Rebirth okay? If you have something to spare.........I am in dire need of votes for the contest.

3yr