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2021-03-22 03:41

I read until chapter 10, and I didn't really like the story until then The alleged exchange that Haru made with the system was unfair in my opinion, The haru byakugan doesn’t seem to have anything special so far, and he has exchanged a pure divine lineage for that Aside from the carelessness that the haru took, he never tried to observe the city using his byakugan? He was surprised when the fallen angels appeared, The city where Haru lives is one of the places where there is a concentration of supernatural beings, But has he never seen one? Even with your byakugan? Haru himself had already said that he used the byakugan from time to time inside the school to observe Issei, but he never even saw the demons of his own school at a glance? With a 360 ° view? Seriously? The story has minor spelling errors, but it's not something that really gets in the way in reading I am happy that there is an image of Haru on the cover of the story, as it is only said that he has red hair and a beautiful face I don't know if my English is good, so I used Google Translate to write this, I apologize for any mistakes

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