I came here for review swap, but the story was damn great! The concept is thrilling. I really like the world setting, the first chapter beautifully describes the world and the events that took place. It immediately hooked me in. However the grammar and dialogues get really choppy in the second and third chapter. Ignoring that the story seems promising and engaging. I will definitely give it a read. So best of luck with the story and thanks for Reading mine too.
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