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Hello, shining it's me. The guy who was interested on a review swap. First of, I am sorry for reading only 5 chapters because I don't have enough time to read everything. So take my review with a grain of salt. For I am but a slow reader. Ok let's get started. The story is jarringly wholesome at first. We first meet a lovely lady name Amy (I think I got it right?). The whole plot is about a very loving couple that has a bit of simping behaviour but we don't talk about that. It's actually cute not gonna lie. It also gave me a boner too but nahhhh let's not talk about the thing growing in my pants for now. As for writing quality, it's all dialogue and a bit of description. Not gonna complain about that. Oh and a writers advice. Have you considered any fancy words? If your going to make the chapters short (which they are) try to add a bit of flavour. Take for example: "She has quite the robust chest or Hmmm, what well verse and adequate song!" Kinda like that but better than mine. I think that raps it up. I don't have anymore to say other than the those two. Sincerely yours, the guy you asked. Teehee, I'm so bad 😉

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