Review Detail of Jenjibread in I Just Called To Say I Love You 

I personally don't usually read these CEO novels, especially those with mature content, so I'm just going to give an objective review here. Writing Quality: There were some capitalization issues and grammatical issues in general. I think running the story through a grammar checker would help, but the overall story is really clear. (Docked off a point there) Stability of Updates: Can't really speak to that but seems fine. Story Development: Pretty clear and doesn't waste time getting into the topic. I think for cute romance stories like this one, it definitely helps ease the reader into the mood immediately. Character Design: The details help, especially with the part with the photos. World Background: Nothing in particular other than the switches in scenes being outlined make the storyline smoother and clearer but also take away from me personally being immersed in your writing a bit.